Comments : Live on

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Hey Shellaine I found your poem very very sad girl I'm so sorry that you've been feeling sad if you feel like talking drop me a line.otherwise an emotional write.
    Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by stillmomsgirl

    "praying my tear drops will bring you back to life..."

    This line describes the way I felt for a very long time after my mom died. I thought if I cried hard enough, it might bring her back. This poem brought me to tears. This is one of the most beautiful things I've ever read. Amazing. 5/5

    ~stillmomsgirl~

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    Oh My dear, this just broke my heart.
    But in writing we release our pain . We may never rid our selves of them but at least we can ease them.
    A wonderfully emotional poem, you have much heart and it flows to the readers.