Comments : Inner Peace

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    I enjoyed this poem very much. It was a walk through the life of a child. A tough path but a good end.
    Your form was wonderful as was your story..great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Mycquel

    I literally have a serious case of goosebumps right now! It was a great poem and u really painted a picture with your words!