The real me

Hello
I am deeply thankfull to you that you have rated and made comments on my poem in the near past.
I have submitted my peom "Child Beggar Noshi",That i wrote when i was a Student of Civil Engineer,this is a real story of a Young Girl,and when i meet her,i was deeply grieved to see her condition.Kindly read my poem "Child Begger Noshi" and rate and Comment on it,to let me know,did it touched your heart or not
You won my heart by commenting on my poem....i am expecting that you do this favour again
Thanks alot
Love

Wow, you've got me hooked, i need more of your poetry. I have never even thought to write something like this. This is very amazing, and moving. Keep writing. Alot of people, including me, can relate to this but do not have the courage to crawl out of your shell. And even if you have not put your words to action, just writing about it means you have hope, and that makes you very strong. Take care. 5/5

~stillmomsgirl~

Wow passionate positive,the real you? I sure hope so im rooting for you all the way you go girl and grab the world by the horns.Beautifully written it flowed well rhymed well but i know thats not what it's about .well done

Wow passionate positive,the real you? I sure hope so im rooting for you all the way you go girl and grab the world by the horns.Beautifully written it flowed well rhymed well but i know thats not what it's about .well done