Climb on board

by Jim McMillen the man within   Jun 24, 2008


6/24/08

This is a joint effort by Grant Gilbert and myself .
I hope you enjoy reading it as much as we enjoyed writing it.
Thanks JIM + Grant

CLIMB ON BOARD

For every smile received ,
A sorrow relieved.
For every friendly embrace,
Another smile on my face.

So with a smile upon my face
And a glow upon my heart
I find the world is filled with grace
As I awake and a new day starts

perpetual motion of a peaceful mind,
passed along from one to another.
the more you give the more you find,
you've gained another brother.

So brothers we be and brothers we'll stay,
Lets go out and create more smiles.
For there are more we'll meet along the way.
So climb on board and we'll cover some miles.

I love you like a brother,
You'll know me by my smile
My friend, Here have another,
To Carry you another mile.

When your road becomes long,
Your load, heavy like no other.
I hope this smile will make you strong,
you're not heavy , you are my brother!

Jim Mcmillen---Grant Gilbert

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    You're not heavy , you are my brother!

    This reminds me of an old American song...it was a very beautiful song of friendship and so is this poem. You both did well on this, I could not tell it was written by two people, so you were both very much in tune with one another:)

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    Jim you and Grant make a marvelous team. This was sweet and touching with a wonderful flow
    Great write5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Coolness poem.5/5
    **living dead

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsea King

    I loved it, it made me smile for the first time wihtout faking it in a while!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsea King

    I loved it, it made me smile for the first time wihtout faking it in a while!!