Comments : Climb on board

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsea King

    I loved it, it made me smile for the first time wihtout faking it in a while!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsea King

    I loved it, it made me smile for the first time wihtout faking it in a while!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsea King

    I loved it, it made me smile for the first time wihtout faking it in a while!!

  • 16 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Coolness poem.5/5
    **living dead

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    Jim you and Grant make a marvelous team. This was sweet and touching with a wonderful flow
    Great write5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    You're not heavy , you are my brother!

    This reminds me of an old American song...it was a very beautiful song of friendship and so is this poem. You both did well on this, I could not tell it was written by two people, so you were both very much in tune with one another:)

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid