I loved it. It was so real and genuine. You just opened up your heart and was like "Here is what it is, take it or leave it." The emotions your expressed were so easy for many to relate with. Don't make excuses for your writing, if people don't like it then they can go away loll. I loved every word of it because it was so you. Nothing was fake which made it amazing. Love it, for sure enter it in the contest. I wish you luck my sweetie Temps :]]

*5/5*

This was a nice way to let out your feelings. Being a prose does not decrease the poems value at all. It was a great and clear way to express your feelings.
I dont know what more to say than good job and keep at it =)

Wow this is really good..alot of people can relate to this poem. it was genuine... something that alot of people will read and just be like wow that sounds like it was about me lol you know what i mean?

fantastic job.. flow was not off at all.

5/5 from me :)

Yeah....that is...spitting out words.. ;) Well...I think...this was.. *smiles* very reality poem *blushing*...

You know...it reminds...exact my friend's relationship... Where..this relationship...stuck on...forever level...

So this poem...it reveals you kind of had this big crush...a love at the first sight...they say thingy.. It is creating kind of cute image...that someone actually can think this way..

The poem was like a short story...and it was easy to follow...

It is very teaching for me to read a poem like this with perfect grammar and wording.

Well-written poem. I liked the theme.. :)

Wow this was amazing, did you win your contest??! or it hasn't happened yet?! because you should this was amazing, I know how this goes though trust me., i've been there and done it. but maybe you should just tell him how you feel to get it over with because you never know maybe he likes you and is afraid to tell you?! hey you never know.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

I loved it! The emotions were pure and it was like you just poured you heart out into your words. IT WAS REAL. I can't find anything to critique in a negative way, because I think it's perfect just the way it is.
BRAVO! Lovely ;)

In the begginning it was kind of happy, made me think that this was more about a new love, but then as you kept reading, it had a very interesting twist. You twisted the story and told everyone about how you guys were just friends for such a long time. I love this poem, great emotion. 5/5

I loved this. I feel like you were completely honest about your feelings. Also, I happen to think it's very poetic, the way you've worded them. It's from the heart, and totally emotional, and I liked that. I feel as though it's key when writing something. And I liked the repetition of "-our relationship" in the third, fourth, and fifth stanza's. It shows you took plenty of time explaining the relationship between two people. To be able to put your whole heart into a poem takes talent, and you've got that, undoubtedly. Wonderful job.

5/5

-Briana