Comments : Unwelcomed...you've closed you heart

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachelle

    Wow that is really sad I likd it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    Your true pain is felt in every one of your poems hun and its so so sad. I hope one day she will feel your pain before its too late...As a mother of 2 myself i cant understand it it makes me so so cross

  • 16 years ago

    by MR F R 3 S H

    Nice poem u did a excellent job with this poem I really liked this 1 =D
    5/5 keep doin wat u do =]

  • 16 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    The reality of your pain is apparent through this! i started to tear up while reading this :)

    5/5