This Day

by Lovebattery   Jun 24, 2008


Thoughts of you turning spinning inside my head,
thinking of all the things we've talked of an said,
your smile so vibrant, beautiful and bright,
when i kiss you it just feels so right,
it's only been 4ish days since we met,
....and yet,
thoughts of you flood my mind,
i never knew there were women of your kind,
if you were to ask me,
my definition of true beauty,
all i could think to say,
what i would repeat everyday,
so this is all i would say ...Erin,
at her i just cannot stop my starin,
i never realized i was alone,
until i had her in my arms at my home,
i so hope she feels the same way,
that i could be so lucky she thinks of me this day!

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  • Hey hun...just a couple things you might want to correct in your poem...
    *woman should be women
    *the second line...an should be and
    There's a couple other things but I think it's more dialect and not really typos...
    Emotion is an important part of poetry and I can tell by reading the poem how u feel. :)
    Keep writing
    ~Much love~
    Jonda Beth

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