Awwww i like this poem alot.. as soon as i read a few lines i started smiling..

it was beautiful.. although i didnt really like the birthday suit part. i think it just didnt make the poem the best it could be.

i see this as more of a story than a poem.

but it was great. 5/5

Wow That Was Really Good Thts All I Can Really Say Actually It Was More Like Amazing :)