I loved this! The metaphors were just... perfect. I especially liked "the sun of my life's forcast." This poem is really sweet.
You're a natural, for sure. :D
Keep it up! 5/5

Love,
Tina

This was very romantic. The last line was a bit sad since the speaker can only dream about whoever they're speaking to. The metaphors you used were so good. I liked when you used "The truth when the world is a lie." to speak about whoever this poem is about. Because honestly is one of the major things one looks for and not so easily found.