Comments : To Be a Raindrop

  • 16 years ago

    by Strange and Beautiful

    I love this poem. It was great. Nature is truly beautiful, its gods creation. You showed that in this piece.
    Very good work!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Oooh, Gabby. This was a very interesting poem. It made me look at raindrops in a different way, almost like they were human.

    Dance gently on the sunset's arms
    ^^ Ahhhhh. Love this line. It makes the sunset seem touchable and alive.

    You have a very creative mind. It's amazing how you can take something so simple as a raindrop and turn it into something so much more. I really enjoyed reading this.

    Keep writing!
    Cayce