Climb on Board

by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash   Jun 25, 2008


This is a joint effort by Jim Mcmillen and myself

CLIMB ON BOARD

For every smile received ,
A sorrow relieved.
For every friendly embrace,
Another smile on my face.

So with a smile upon my face
And a glow upon my heart
I find the world is filled with grace
As I awake and a new day starts

perpetual motion of a peaceful mind,
passed along from one to another.
the more you give the more you find,
you've gained another brother.

So brothers we be and brothers we'll stay,
Lets go out and create more smiles.
For there are more we'll meet along the way.
So climb on board and we'll cover some miles.

I love you like a brother,
You'll know me by my smile
My friend, Here have another,
To Carry you another mile.

When your road becomes long,
Your load, heavy like no other.
I hope this smile will make you strong,
you're not heavy , you are my brother!

Jim Mcmillen---Grant Gilbert

Submission date : 2008-06-24

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  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    I had read this on Jims list and thought I needed to comment on yours as well . the two of you did a marvelous job of putting this together. The flow was good, and it was just a touching poem.
    great job5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by gracey grey

    Most amazing, wonderful, excellent write (both of you). Its does work you know, the smiling part when one reads poem such as this......the last line reminds me of the song 'He ain't heavy, he's my brother'.Have you heard it?Lovely song.........even lovelier poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tears

    This was a perfect joining of two personalities. Each stanza brought something special to the whole poem
    I enjoyed this very much.

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