Comments : Climb on Board

  • 16 years ago

    by Tears

    This was a perfect joining of two personalities. Each stanza brought something special to the whole poem
    I enjoyed this very much.

  • 16 years ago

    by gracey grey

    Most amazing, wonderful, excellent write (both of you). Its does work you know, the smiling part when one reads poem such as this......the last line reminds me of the song 'He ain't heavy, he's my brother'.Have you heard it?Lovely song.........even lovelier poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    I had read this on Jims list and thought I needed to comment on yours as well . the two of you did a marvelous job of putting this together. The flow was good, and it was just a touching poem.
    great job5/5