Very very good

This was very well done. the first stanza drew me in completely, which is why it won you first place in my contest. it takes a good writer to make you oblivious to your surrounding when you read something, and you accomplished that. excellent job.

Amazing.. some poems you start off reading and you think 'well it sounds like the last one i just read' but this is catchy and well thought out.. very nice

"Soaked in sweat,
You're all alone,
Praying for the light.

The suns sweet kiss,
Upon your skin,
Sure that you're alive,"

What descriptions and imagery you portray in these lines, its simple, but yet so descriptive and breathtaking. This whole poem was so captivating and I felt like I was that person, feeling all that was going on. Your emotions were strong all the way, and really caught up to me. You definetly had me wanting more by the end, and the person in this poem came so alive to the reader. A very mind-blowing and thrilling poem to read. 5/5 from me, take care. Keep writing, always and forever.....