Comments : Knew

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Hey i really liked that read and format, your poem was short but sweet most definately. You had a great opening line

    I need a little help, waking only to the cold morning light.

    I swear i knew.
    i knew it all along.

    I love you.

    Nice work 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

    Cold morning light really caught my attention.

    Your words left me on the edge of my seat till the end which i liked very much to.