Yes, sadly we all must lose someone in time, I liked your poem but i loved your first stanza the most, I really liked how you also showed curiousity in this poem to. My favorite line was

Still looking in the clouds
wondering if they are soft

Nice work maybe u can read one of mine.

1 word... WOW. i know its sad and stuff but i can totally relate to this porm. its beautiful... so much story in it and feeling. great work!!