by Michelle18
Wow.. im so blown away by this poem.. every word just kept me wanting to read more.. i dont see anything wrong with this poem what so ever. |
OMG... u poem was very neatly written.. The whole poem was fantastic...each line made me crave for more.... I can think of so many situations that ur poem covers... It was deep. Good job, and I'm happy to say that it was long but thankful so, because it made sense unlike some others.. I loved da ending....OMG... |
by victoria
This was by far the best poem ive read in a very very long time. |
by Nil
This poem gave me chills. Wonderful job. The imagery you used was brilliant. The distinct difference between light and dark in the beginning then! The ending pretty much made me speechless. 5/5 |
Omg this is like the best poem i think i have read on here trul y flowing and truly amazing. 5/5 for sure 1000/5 if it were possible.. great job |
by linkhorizon
Breathtaking! i read it at least twice. keep up the beautiful work. 5/5 all the way. |
by Ray Blue
Fantabulous poem. I wish the ending could be different. I couldn't distinguish the true irony since all lines are so ironic. Overall, its a great poem... 5/5! |
by dora
Wow!! amazing poem, i looked at it being so long and thought 'this has to be good' lol and it realli was. all the lines were great! it was such a powerful piece. lot of emotion in it also. great job! 5/5 xo. |
by ether
There's a little too much repetition in here of filler words, it would be a lot easier to read if you had less. |