A Storm Is Brewing~Haiku

by Poet on the Piano   Jun 25, 2008


Thunder roars loudly,
Lightning flashes through the sky,
Darkness emerges.

Small hail starts to form,
As the harsh wind blows fiercely,
Destruction occurs.

People start to run,
To a safe place of shelter,
Until the storm calms.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    MaryAnne,

    the fist two Haiku's in this chain were really strong and descriptive, but the third one could have been much stronger than it was.
    If I were you I would have added one about the storm havind died down..something like that, or change the wording a little.
    Overall it was a good Haiku chain!

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    This was very nice. I felt like I was experiencing it. your imagery is very good. Nice job all around

  • 16 years ago

    by Raychil

    Very beautiful. Wonderful dipiction of a storm setting, marvelous work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Lovely graphic imagery,haiku's aren't easy, you did an excellent job.Well done

    Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Short but it included the whole idea and I think this is kinda hard thing to do..Actually I'm not that good to do that so U got a great talent,keep it up:)..
    and Keep smiling:)..

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