Comments : A Storm Is Brewing~Haiku

  • 16 years ago

    by Benito

    Great job. i enjoyed reading this one.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Short but it included the whole idea and I think this is kinda hard thing to do..Actually I'm not that good to do that so U got a great talent,keep it up:)..
    and Keep smiling:)..

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Lovely graphic imagery,haiku's aren't easy, you did an excellent job.Well done

    Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by Raychil

    Very beautiful. Wonderful dipiction of a storm setting, marvelous work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    This was very nice. I felt like I was experiencing it. your imagery is very good. Nice job all around

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    MaryAnne,

    the fist two Haiku's in this chain were really strong and descriptive, but the third one could have been much stronger than it was.
    If I were you I would have added one about the storm havind died down..something like that, or change the wording a little.
    Overall it was a good Haiku chain!

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid