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by Mister 47
Well i like it very much but if i may sugest some thing you might find usefull to enrich the poem to be better the rose in your words , drink water and want sunlight i would sugest she drink love and need your man your rose would not cry , it demolish herself petal by petal slowly dying and fading away to the void ... i hope i inspre you a bit good work