Comments : Black Rose

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Well i like it very much but if i may sugest some thing you might find usefull to enrich the poem to be better

    the rose in your words , drink water and want sunlight
    i would sugest she drink love and need your man

    your rose would not cry , it demolish herself petal by petal

    slowly dying and fading away to the void

    ...

    i hope i inspre you a bit

    good work