by Lousy Eyes Jun 26, 2008
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
The sounds of joy and laughter |
by Sora
This was a beautiful piece of work. i loved it! very expressive, and very true and honestly written. you did a fantastic job. |
Wonderful imagery here. I love the ocean and also hate leaving it behind, but I'm guessing this poem is a metaphor. The beach could be any place, any moment, any peasant experience that we wish could last, but know won't. The lines "To leave an imprint |