Comments : My now, my future, my past

  • 16 years ago

    by Elapsed

    Really enjoyed this warm, heartfelt piece...

    "Expect this love i couldn't
    Didn't believe it could exist
    That i would leave behind everything
    If i could own your kiss"

    Falling unexpectedly is one of the greatest feelings and you have done well to put them into such wonderful words... wonderful job on this write.

  • 16 years ago

    by Just Keara

    I love this poem! its amazing.