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by devils angel sunrise   Jun 26, 2008


Life's damage dawns hatred past
life teases still lost between
my past and future wondering
where it all started

imbeded with hate and dread
life has cast a darkness
hidden with in i dare
not ask afraid of

the danger within searching
for away out killing
those who i love
destroying who i was

leaving me with nothing but
this sickness, hatred, lust
disseat, death
loneliness, anger, depression

surrender to it
i have letting
depression take hold

control who i am
kill who i was
desolation and conviction of
cruses has been cast

on the world
the day takes
her innocence away
as such all

trust severed damage
of past mistakes
takes control kill
all to save
life's sweet bliss

*there is no title that fit this poems power i know that you my readers understand my poems better than i do some times so i ask for you to lead my poem to a title thank you all and as usual if you have a question about the poem just ask*

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  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Oh wow, dawn. my beautiful sunrise....

    this poem is so powerful. it feels like you open up a little bit more in every single poem you like. i have no idea what you would titlle it...granted, i suck at titles....*hugs*