Comments : LOVE does not exist

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Oh God, U r awesome and ur poem rocks...U used simple and direct words but they were so touchable and I can feel what u r suffering from..
    my fav stanza is:

    I don't want to know about her touch
    Her amazing and tender kiss
    I don't care about how she makes you feel
    In MY world.... LOVE does not exist

    Really good job,plz keep it up:) and enjoy ur life:)...best wishes.