If i

by XoXo   Jun 26, 2008


If i fell to my knees
if i told you i loved you
if i cut a little deeper
if i screamed so loud glass broke
if i cried until my eyes stung
if i threatened

if i got up from the floor
if i told you i hated you
if i dropped my blade
if i was silent
if i hid my tears
if i left forever

would it have any effect on you?

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  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    Dude awesome poem, love it <3 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    This poem is deep. and beautiful in every way.
    you wrote how you felt and thats all that matters. and don't say you don't think yer very good at writing, because we all are, beacuase all the words we pour onto paper come directly from our very hearts.
    you did a wonderful job at expressing yourself on this poem.
    keep up the nice work!

  • 16 years ago

    by ALEX

    Im in love with this poem rite here.
    so intense and deep i really like it.

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