Succumb

by Paralyzed   Jun 26, 2008


Love these little tender pieces,
That I hold inside,
Everything that breaks me down,
Everything I hide.

Know it's not because of you,
This reason I can't share,
It's hard to be so vulnerable,
With hurt that's raw and bare.

Love me even though I'm flawed,
Born in my creation,
This is what I've come to be,
Give into temptation.

Touch me with your subtle hand,
Slowly come to see,
All we've ever dreamt of having,
Here, can come to be.

Time will tear the bricks away,
We have to take a chance,
I'll give you everything I've got,
Let's slip into romance.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dawn aka Dominique

    This poem was okay to me, it didn't seem as mind blowing as all the others but i get the feeling you just wrote to be writng it not like it was for someone or just a release of compassion or anything

    But the poem was okay, just the vibe of it was like :\ not as OMG! I love this poem u know?

    keep writing 4/5