Comments : Succumb

  • 16 years ago

    by Dawn aka Dominique

    This poem was okay to me, it didn't seem as mind blowing as all the others but i get the feeling you just wrote to be writng it not like it was for someone or just a release of compassion or anything

    But the poem was okay, just the vibe of it was like :\ not as OMG! I love this poem u know?

    keep writing 4/5