Right now

by sunnah   Jun 26, 2008


I'm so alone
i just wish i was already gone
i wanna be in love
i wanna sore like a dove

i don't know why humans have become so judge mental
i don't think I've done anything wrong but maybe it was accidental
sadness is hidden with in me
i wish i could let my tears free

I've been laughing and smiling
i feel so fake
to the point were my heart is starting to ache

i wrote this poem because i special friend had told me to wright what i'm feeling at this very moment and this is what i'm feeling

so thanks to her (nour)

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  • 16 years ago

    by LoveTear

    Amazing mashallah, i can say that u described very well what i feel right now... But we always hope 4 a better day ! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Expressive!!!...The poem was really wonderful
    I did love it:)..U did a great job so plz keep it up..
    Salam..

  • 16 years ago

    by Heba

    Wow, i loved your poem sunnah. i have been through the same thing.
    nice poem.
    5\5

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    This poem reflects your feelings... Sadness.. Maybe you are frustrated about life.. Nothing really bad has been going but you feel something is missing..

    People judge you... Well... I hope you ignore them. None of these people who does not love you deserve any of your precious tear.

    You try to hide your sadness and tears.. You admit your smiles have been fake...Now it's time to stop to think... Why you do this...Why they hurt you.

    Learn to know your weakness...where people strike on you... Fix it and face this world as stronger girl...

    Remember...
    In the kingdom of hijab angels everything looks more beautiful.

    Major hugs to my hijab princess.

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