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  • 16 years ago

    by Extinct Angel

    A wonderful lost love poem i rate it 1million/5 you are way better than me on love poems I love the last 2 lines great way to write the truth

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Good one again..

    Keep it up..

    Best wishz...

    Karan

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    I always enjoy reading your poem

    great work

  • 16 years ago

    by Ezzey

    Each time the silence fills the air,
    It beckons doubt wherein to ensnare.
    I'd silently wonder if this is a game you always play,
    Or is it just in my mind that leaves me lost today.

    God bless you ash for this wonderful poem . we truly wish that your well-described sadness is not something real you suffer from,yet we do enjoy the bleeding of your feelings.:D

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    I suck at english but as far as i understood it was good . . I got a little bit of it . Lol . I ll give you 5 . . .