by Jim McMillen the man within Jun 26, 2008
category :
Friendship, family /
cyber friendship
The first poem Baneful Creature was written by my best friend on poems and quotes , I have decided to add it so everyone will know just what the battles end is realy all about . It was written in responce to her poem to help her to overcome |
by Brad Quammen
This was a great! I imagined a Legend,(the movie), style setting.Once again good triumphs over evil.This was a very interesting read. 5/5 |
by Ingrid
In the first stanza there should not be a space between 'adversary'and 'it exhales'. It must have been broken off unintentionally:) |
by Ingrid
Night approaches as the silence grows in anticipation, awaiting its time of arrival. |
by Wishmaster
What a vivid image, a great picture was painted here. Great job, Jim |
This is a nice poem . Very well penned and something to be listened to . I was very impressed with the wisdom. |