Haiku #23

by PygmyPuff   Jun 26, 2008


I can feel in charge,
as he walks in my footsteps.
Now I'm following.

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I hate to repeat myself, but this is breathtaking. You are probably tired of me saying this, but I'm impressed with the depths of your poetry. Excellent piece, seemingly simple yet it holds great meaning. You should be truly proud on yourself, you did fantastic job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rob Matt

    The change is obviouse. Not much emotion though