I like this piece a lot, it is deep and meaningful, and the fact that you managed to express your emotions greatly within such short poem impressed me. This poem is truly excellently written, it is different from anything I've read before and it tells whole story in just three lines which is, honestly, utterly brilliant. You always had an ability to amaze me with your poetry and this is one of those pieces that simply leave me in awe. Overall, this is endlessly profound and memorable. I can relate to the poem which made whole read even more powerful to me.
Greatly done,
keep up!