I gave it to him,
the passion I never had.
Inspire to be.

Oh my girlie, to be honest I'm not much into this type of poetry, the reaosn being is because sometimes I feel it lacks something, me always looking for the whole story. I actually liked this one however, my only issuse was when it cam to your third line Inspire to be...from the second line to that line I feel like I lost something, odd it's short, as it should be but still, I understand that form needs to be kept with in the rules of this poetry however, I couldn't figure out if it was meant to be.. "Yet" or "Never" Inspire to be. You see how I like to place my own words in peoples poetry...damn shame I do this sometimes. I really did like this poem thugh, the simplicity in it and the beauty in the form, it's nicely done, just me over thinking things I suppose.

~Samantha I CoZ This Pain...
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