Comments : I have a secret...

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    It is cute to think your burning love in your heart is a secret. I think the moment you understand you have fall in love with someone is awesome. It feels like the whole world is different. You start noticing things you didn't even know they exists..

    I can relate to this poem and the feeling you are flying in the air.. Only thing spoiling your mood in the poem is a fear he would not feel the same towards to you.

    From expressions
    "this secret is really starting to bother me
    i don't know how much longer i can carry it inside
    my feelings for you i no longer want to hide"
    I feel your heart really bursts because of you love him so much.

    "today will be the day i hope you agree to be mine"
    So in this poem you were about to tell him, make a love confession.

    "God I hope this boy loves me"
    Hmm...I hope so too! :P

    Lovely poem. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Nafees Ahmad

    Its nice. it just touched my heart.

  • 16 years ago

    by BrOkeN HeArt Can kill

    Awwwwwwwwwwwwww ima use this poem wen ever ii wana ask a boy out. =) lmaoo its great & a lot of girls can relate

  • 16 years ago

    by BrOkeN HeArt Can kill

    Awwwwwwwwwwwwww ima use this poem wen ever ii wana ask a boy out. =) lmaoo its great & a lot of girls can relate