Reflect

by stillmomsgirl   Jun 26, 2008


I stare at
my reflection
I want it
to bleed
I want it
to feel
the satisfaction
as the blade
breaks skin
I want it
to weep
crimson tears
and realize
it will
never
be enough

My reflection
stares
back at me
it wants me
to feel
the satisfaction
of knowing
I made it
one more day
it wants me
to throw
the blade away
and realize
I have
-always-
been enough

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  • 16 years ago

    by cudntfindgudsn

    Wow. i like the flow and how u structured ur writing. it flows like a reflection, its really cool how its also visually doing that. =)
    mike

  • 16 years ago

    by khobo

    I liked the truth-ness to it. The ending sort of made me think of this poem as like those inspirational songs and stuff. It's nice how you kept the reality in it. Good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mayara de Oliveira

    It's clear, it's simples and makes you think. I really liked it. Nice ending, btw.
    Good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Interesting write... I really like the conversation between you and your reflection... I interpret reflection as your inner voice trying to help you...

    good write..

    keep writing..

  • 16 years ago

    by InTheseHearts

    A very nice ending! I like how it starts out sad but ends with a thoughtful hopeful outlook. And the very last thought, "I have -always- been enough" was well put because the emphasis was perfect, especially with the way you highlighted the word always and made it stand out. Good job!
    *inthesehearts*

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