Father's Love 1

by H E Losey   Jun 26, 2008


Many water drops
Fall from the skies
Many tear drops
Fall from Father's eyes

The clouds above
Produce the rain
The father's tears
From daughter's pain

As nature's water
Is self-replenishing
So a father's love
Is self-destructing

published 2006

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  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This is really good.. your choice of words made the poem shine..

    but i felt like it didnt say much... maybe adding on to it would make it more complete.

    and it didnt really tell esplain much of a fathers love. it just didt seem complete to me.

    but overall it was pretty good. 4/5

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