I kinda got confused..

in the beginning i thought you were saying that you wanted to tell him how you felt .. and i thought that was meaning you liked him

but then i kept reading and at the end it said you were over him.

so i got a little confused.. maybe you could send me a message explaining it and then i'll go back and re read it.

I really liked this poem alot. It shows how you emotions you have for this one person, of how your afraid to express your feelings but yet your doubting yourself and also saying what would happen if you would ever date him. Which is always could be true but you never know. you did an amazing job again.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

I liked the format you had and your emotions felt real.

I can't tell you all these feelings built up inside me,
because I'm afraid I won't hear the same thing back.

I can't tell you how I feel,
because I'm afraid you just don't feel the same.

^Those two say basically the same thing but I like the first one better.

I can't keep thinking about you,
because I overthink things way too much.
^ I overthink things too but I've learned not to overanalyze life and just dance to its music because life is too short to question everything.

I can't do this,
because I know I'm not good enough for you.

^Not good enough for him? Are you kidding me?! You're my Temps, the sweetie I love talking to everyday. Why are you putting yourself down? I don't want to hear you saying things like that because you're an amazing person.

I am officially over you, for the time being,
because I need to rethink how I feel about you.

^ I liked the ending because it was heartfelt and true.

Well done *5/5*

Ok ok i re read it.. and i apologized.. i so get it now lol.

i see that your really the one confused in this poem lol. yup i've been there. it sux. but hope things get better.

5/5

I loved the repitition in this one too. :) Good usage. Very similar to the last poem so I don't have much more to say than good. Four out of five.

Wow. I really, really like this. It seems heartfelt, and very emotional to me, and that's awesome.

"I can't see that connection, that special bond we share,
because there never was one, not even from the start."

^^ That's my favourite part of this piece. I feel like it gives the reader an idea of the relationship, or lack thereof, between the people the poem is about.

Great job.

5/5

-Briana

I truly adored that one. I liked how I could feel the way you felt in the stanza's you had written. Most of us can relate in one way or another, sometime in out lives.

Now I do feel like you contradicted yourself, you said you don't want to think about him, because you overthink alot, but at the end you want to think about your feelings for him, and at the same time your over him.

Very confusing. But all in all great writing. Hope to see more from you soon.

5/5