by Courageous Dreamer Jun 26, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I can go on without you, |
by BREEawNUHH
I loved this. In fact, I pretty much love everything you write. It all comes off so real, and just straight from the heart. That's always important when it comes to writing, I think. I like how you say you don't this particular person to be your boyfriend, or best friend, and how you say you can go on without him. The end was quite good. Starting over is always the first step when it comes to getting over someone, even if there was never much of a relationship to begin with. I loved it. |
by The Prince
This poem is openly and beautifully honest, and I love it 5/5 |
by Mr. Darcy
Spilling out ones feelings is theraputic. I am guessing this just flowed out. It has an ease about it that is refreshing and an honesty that is pureness. I can relate to this at the moment too, so it is helpful to read from other similar experiences. |
Anyways, now that I know that this is new I have to say I loved the repition, and how after each I can't you went on to say why. That was good. It was a good poem that kept me reading to see what I can't would pop up next. :) Four out of five. |
by Michelle18
This is really good.. i felt the same way before with the person that im with right now. i kinda feel that way but im waiting for him to tell me how he feels before i do something i will regret. |