All I ever wanted to know was how you felt,
and I never discovered that.

^ and you wont find that out unless you take a chance :] Look at me and the postion I am in. I liked the guy for four years and took unbelievable chances but in the end we didn't end up together but I was proud of myself because at least I tried. I'm just saying I don't want you to regret it you know? You don't have to decide anything now hun just clear your mind of these tangled thoughts and have an amazing summer then go for it!

*5/5*

This was another great poem you have wrote. upabove she's right, =] just remember that honestly. and you had will clear soon and writing poems will help try to figure something out, i've done that quite a few times and found out what i needed to do after writing some poems.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

This line made me think I've read this before
I need to lose all those feelings I once had for you,
Because you said you need to give up on feelings you've already given up on. That makes no sense.

I think I have read this before so I don't want to say anything more other than it was pretty good. Lol. I might have commnted it. You'll have to tell me.

This is really good.. i felt the same way before with the person that im with right now. i kinda feel that way but im waiting for him to tell me how he feels before i do something i will regret.

just take time to clear your mind and make sure that your making the right decision.

as for the poem.. it was very emotional and heartfelt.

good job. and good luck with everything.

5/5

Anyways, now that I know that this is new I have to say I loved the repition, and how after each I can't you went on to say why. That was good. It was a good poem that kept me reading to see what I can't would pop up next. :) Four out of five.

Spilling out ones feelings is theraputic. I am guessing this just flowed out. It has an ease about it that is refreshing and an honesty that is pureness. I can relate to this at the moment too, so it is helpful to read from other similar experiences.

Thank you

Michael

This poem is openly and beautifully honest, and I love it 5/5

I loved this. In fact, I pretty much love everything you write. It all comes off so real, and just straight from the heart. That's always important when it comes to writing, I think. I like how you say you don't this particular person to be your boyfriend, or best friend, and how you say you can go on without him. The end was quite good. Starting over is always the first step when it comes to getting over someone, even if there was never much of a relationship to begin with. I loved it.

5/5

``Briana