"Lighten flashes as bellowing follows"
-Lighten or lightning? lol

Whoo hooo. Go Jennnnn<3 Awesome nature poem yet again. and I love how you described the violent storm!! yaynessss for youu mi chica ;) yeah, i swear something is wrong w/ me tonight. hahaaa.. 5/5 my dearr!

What else can I say about your piece that you did not already express. very nice and smooth with delicate emotional bumps that keep us hoping for more. I will be reading more.