Dancing in the Rain

by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden   Jun 27, 2008


It rains down hard as she lets her black dress flare
and she dances to no music without a care.
Her hair flies wildly as she splashes in every pool,
letting the water drench her, sparkling like a jewel.

All is silent except for the pitter patter
of the rain and the sound of the sky shatter.
Alone outside with no one to see
that girl outside has always been me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sam Hindmarsh

    Cooool loves it

  • 16 years ago

    by mandy

    Wow, beautifuly put. I love every line and it flowed so nicely. Great job, 5/5.

    -mandy :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Very nice and very smooth with the nice flow of your thoughts set to just the right motion. I think you captured each emotion with just the right touch to leave them on the page unharmed and waiting to be absorbed by other poets willing to appreciate your words. very nice - keep it up. peace

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Oh damnnn girl XD i love dancing in the rain. it's a lot of fun. but, if you are alone.. it's not as fun. it's even more fun to dance w/ your love. =) great jobbbbb. yay. go you! what is this the 4th poem today? hellll yeaaa, keep it up girllll. :]] 5 outtt of 5.

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