Oh damnnn girl XD i love dancing in the rain. it's a lot of fun. but, if you are alone.. it's not as fun. it's even more fun to dance w/ your love. =) great jobbbbb. yay. go you! what is this the 4th poem today? hellll yeaaa, keep it up girllll. :]] 5 outtt of 5. |
by Tom Swart
Very nice and very smooth with the nice flow of your thoughts set to just the right motion. I think you captured each emotion with just the right touch to leave them on the page unharmed and waiting to be absorbed by other poets willing to appreciate your words. very nice - keep it up. peace |
by mandy
Wow, beautifuly put. I love every line and it flowed so nicely. Great job, 5/5. |
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