I Hate It When A Guy

by Michelle18   Jun 27, 2008


I hate it when a guy,
Says what he doesn't mean.

I hate it when a guy,
Shows off just to cause a scene.

I hate it when a guy,
Always thinks he is right.

I hate it when a guy,
Doesn't come home at night.

I hate it when a guy,
Always cheats and lies.

I hate it when a guy,
Makes me cry so many cries.

I hate it when a guy,
Only calls when you've got something he needs.

I hate it when a guy,
Expects you to get on your knees.

I hate it when a guy,
Drives me up the wall.

But mostly, I hate it when a guy,
Says he loves me when he doesn't at all.

(C) 2008 Michelle Small

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  • 16 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    Sometimes guys like us can be a bunch of dumbarses. The way your portray all sorts of faults that we have through your poetry was quite different. but i love the way you typed up the end " But mostly, I hate it when a guy,
    Says he loves me when he doesn't at all.",
    It does seem to be that most guys have that distasteful quirk but don't worry not alot of us do. Excellent work -
    Raindrops 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Well I guess a lot of girls hate that... even me.. but as they say boys will be boys... no matter what they will remain like that...

    wonderfully written... Really liked it...

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Love the repetitiveness of the poem, your words and contradictions are amazing and would have taken a while to think up to phrase it well. this was excellent. your time and dedication on this poem was evident.

    5/5 David

  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    I hate that too!

    great job!

    <3 Aly

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    Hmmm, this sounds alot like Avrils song 'the best *amn thing' to me so i don't think it's very original... but if you actually came up with this on your own good job... I'm not going to vote

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