Comments : Dead On The Inside, Lost On The Outside!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    A lovely write.
    very emotional, you got your message across very well.
    great work keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by S R P

    I enjoyed this, though one suggestion:

    "geuss" should be changed to "guess" - it's a small issue, but proper spelling REALLY helps with the flow and structure of a poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Wow it was so great!I loved it great great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Great poem i really liked this one. keep up the good work ^_^

  • 14 years ago

    by iamYOURS

    Screw her..lol im kidding..jussst kidding..nice poem..i guess im going to read all of your poems