Within The Shadows

by Sora   Jun 27, 2008


She thinks of him, wishing he was by her side,
While sitting in the stillness of the night.
She hears nothing but the thunder rolling,
As the darkness is nearly blinding her sight.

She listens carefully,
As she hears footsteps.
She turns her head,
And sees a shadow moving just a few feet from her left.

Her heart beats faster,
As the thunder continues to roll on.
She calls out, "Who's there?"
But is interrupted by a call coming through on her cell phone.

She says, "Hello?"
He says, "It's me."
She recognizes the voice, and replies, "Where are you?"
He says, "Look back to your left and you will see."

While thinking it's really him,
She glances to her left and gasps.
She says to herself, I can finally hold him in my arms,
She lets out a deep breath and mumbles, "At last."

She runs up to him,
With arms open wide.
She's about to lay her head on his chest,
When suddenly, his figure subsides.

Now, waking up in a sweat,
She gazes around the darkness of the night.
She sits up, breathing hard,
While in shock and in fright.

She thinks to herself,
It was all just a dream.
As a single tear rolls down her cheek,
While sobbing, "No, please come back to me."

As she continues to gaze around at the shadows,
Now with tears streaking her face like rain.
She never knew a dream,
Could cause so much pain...

Please, tell me what you think. =]

Ashlei.

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  • 16 years ago

    by That One Girl

    Wow that was deep
    im almost in tears
    another moving poem!
    you got talent!
    5/5
    btw you should think about writing songs
    Lex

  • 16 years ago

    by Megan

    "She thinks to herself,
    It was all just a dream.
    As a single tear rolls down her cheek,
    While sobbing, "No, please come back to me."

    that was my favorite part
    so emotional
    so heartbreaking
    it was amazing
    i dont know what else to say
    great write.

  • 16 years ago

    by Im Not Emo

    I am seriously so amazed by this, I don't know why, it must hit me some way on a personal level also but your last lines..

    As she continues to gaze around at the shadows,
    Now with tears streaking her face like rain.
    She never knew a dream,
    Could cause so much pain...

    Absolutely left me in awe, left me staring at the screen and wishing that I could write something like that with so much meaning. I truely admire this. AMAZING :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Beautiful poem hun,
    i loved the words and the flow was great!
    keep up the amazing work.
    and thank you so much for commenting on mine.
    love love xo

  • 16 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    I like the story-telling element of this poem. It kinda sucks you in and makes you want to keep reading. Good work dear. 5/5

    ~Ravey~