My First

by Sourav   Jun 27, 2008


Your first blunt lie to me
My first feel of the crude destiny
For the first time I cried alone all night long
Now I'm trying to make that a pensive song

When I realized life's not as it seems
It's not all about pleasant dreams
When you decided to break off the thread
For the first time I felt that, I'm dead

First time I tied up myself with the cigarette
Smoke and ashes lies at the heaven's gate
As I used to know, they call love a heaven
But I perceived hatred is also planted at eden's lane

Shame, hatred, anger turned to a rage
I filled up my dairy's page after page
When I walked down alone in your street
I got my first taste of resentful defeat

Then I picked up my reclusive guitar
A piquant pen and a piece of paper
My feelings started to play an eventful word game
And unknowingly came out my first written poem.

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  • 16 years ago

    by vintage darling

    This poem is amazing.
    and any person could relate to at least one part of the poem.
    it's time like these that people sometimes create their best works.

    -naivegirl

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "When I realized life's not as it seems
    It's not all about pleasant dreams
    When you decided to break off the thread
    For the first time I felt that, I'm dead"

    ^Loved that part! You really stated your emtions and thoughts well in this poem. I enjoyed reading your words and you wrote this very well. I like the ending part, how you started to write, and a poem formed by that. Nice job, keep on writing! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    Wooww:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Thoughtless Consideration

    I love how this just completely portrays the birth of poetry in a way...it was really amazing and i think alot of people are able to relate.
    great job.

    5/5 (:

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Guitar... first pem... wow.... a nice jurney... nice poem again sourav.... It was amazing as all ur other works..

    Keep it up..

    Best wishes,

    Karan

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