Soft white feature
dropped from the skies
I looked up at the skies
but I saw nothing
-what could it be?
^ Did you mean feather? I can imagine if a feather had been dropped from above, it would indeed be easily missed. Nice alluring question at the end too!

I walked in the summer fields
with a summer hat on my head
I felt a light touch on my shoulder
-was it a breeze of summer wind?
^I like the image you begin with. You may want to change one of the 'summers' as this is distracting. Maybe, 'I walked amongst the poppy field' something like that. A description of the field you are walking through. A question again. I like that! Again, you may want to use another word instead of two similar words. Such as ' Was it the quill or the summer's breeze?'

I was swimming in the lake
skies reflection was on the surface
I saw a beautiful light dancing on it
I felt something very warm touch my heart
^This is refreshing. Lovely imagery here, I can really see your thought process.

Are you still there
my little baby cupido
reminding me to loving him
when he is not here around
^This made me laugh out loud. 'my little baby cupido' I don't know what a cupido is, but it sure does sound cute. I smiled!! I am sure you meant to say 'reminds me to love him, even when he's not around'?

Well done Noor. Another wonderful write from you!

Michael

Hmm. an intresting piece of writing specially last stanza, excellent piece of work

Lovely cuipdo, how lovely, u find always cupdio reminding u by love