Comments : Happy Forever {Triquatrain}

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Beautiful sweet poem!

    i really like the rhyming scheme in this one.. its different from most poems that i've read.

    great job. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Awww. Dang, I've been going through this same exact thing lately. This expressed everything I could ever feel for the person that I like. You basically took the words straight from my mouth. This style that you used yet again was very unique and I'm gald to see it again. It's a wonderful choice of style. It works neatly with the poem and helps the flow be smooth and easy to read the piece. Anyways, overall.. I'm going to have to say a 5/5 again. This style is really intriguing and very unique in it's own way. You did a excellent job expressing your feelings.. and how this person is perfect, yet.. best friends is all the best you can have in return. (: 5/5