I think you did a nice job with the rhyme scheme! it was a pretty deep poem but i liked it. im here if u ever need any comments or critiquing or if u jus wanna chat. :-)

p.s.- feel free to comment or critique any of my poems if u want to

Nice flow; well written :) a true depic of a commonly felt emotion

I'm not usually a person that likes sad poems such as these, but this had a different edge to it. I like it.

This is good, again, youve done a good job at expressing yourself here. It flowed well and i found it was creative, and unique. It wasnt like all the other sad poems ya no?

As I sit in the darkness listening but not hearing
The sounds of the people I pushed away
But also always really fearing
That they would come and see me this way

^^ That stanza is the only one i would have to say could be worked on. Its intense and emotionals, BUT I just think the rhyme scheme in that stanza could be worked on.

Thats just my opinion tho. But apart from that, well done. 5/5