Wow, this was brilliant. It held my attention from beginning to end. I wasn't really sure whether to take the 'she' being spoken of as a good guy or a bad guy, which is something I liked, because it issued a sense of wonder.

"...haunting hearts of dreamers..." -- This line gave off the impression of a dark, deadly creature, particularly because of the word 'haunting'.

However, these lines:

"She isn't Goddess or queen
but my unawares source of water in desert,
alcohol without consequences."

...gave me the sense that she was a helpful creature. A source of comfort when needed. However, in the line 'She isn't Goddess or queen', I would put 'a' before 'Goddess'.

Overall, nicely done. :}